A17 Elevator Pitch Practice! (Part 2!)



Feedback: I got the feedback that I should mention where my idea for this came from, or how it was inspired.

What changed: I included a different intro that served a double purpose of a hook with a story, but the story also explained the inspiration behind this. Giving my idea a bit more background.  Also, I included a swatch of my sample product textiles.

Comments

  1. UnknownMarch 17, 2018 at 4:20 PM

    I like that you changed your introduction to show people more about the base of your idea, it gave me something to connect your idea with. Your textiles also show us something tangible and the statistics you mention make you more credible as it shows you did your research. You do really well presenting your idea, in the future, I think if you stood up and moved around a bit more it could be more dynamic and work in your favor.

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  2. UnknownMarch 18, 2018 at 3:40 PM

    Hi Cristian,
    I like how you appealed to the ethical side of your solution and that you addressed the fact that it's hard to go vegan. It shows that you are pitching your idea without attacking people who aren't willing or ready to go vegan and that makes you very personable. Also including the statistics in your video strengthens your pitch for sure. As Georgia said, standing up during your pitch could help but everything was great.
    Thanks for sharing!
    Tess

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  3. Joshua PhilocteteMarch 18, 2018 at 10:14 PM

    Hello Cristian!
    Changing your introduction to something that gives people more background (and, therefore, more understanding) of your idea is something that makes your idea easier to get on board with because it is more relatable. The statistics gave your pitch more validity, and it is interesting because you gave me this same time for my next elevator pitch.
    Thank you!

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